Friday, December 7, 2012

The Changelings - A forgotten story!

Trinity here!
Yesterday I was on Facebook, and I happened to mouse over my cousin's profile picture and saw that her cover photo was this picture:


Which made me do a little inward happy dance, because I actually started writing a story about that particular picture for my creative writing assignment and I had totally forgotten about it! 
Okay, a bit of an explanation: When I say Creative Writing, I mean the homeschool exercise my mother has us do (though not recently). She collects interesting or odd pictures as she surfs the internet and then emails them to us. Our assignment is to look at it, then spend fifteen minutes writing a story about it, without worrying about spelling or grammar, just write. Kind of like a mini NaNoWriMo. 
Anyway, this is one of the pictures that she sent. So I spent 15 (or thirty) minutes writing about it. I liked it so much I decided to continue it with the next picture she sent, which got pretty hard as the story went on. It lasted for eight CW assignments, then my mom said she was getting tired of it every time and she wanted me to write about something else for the assignments, though I was free and encouraged to keep writing about the other story. 
Naturally, without a deadline or continued inspiration, I dropped it and forgot about it. 
Until now. I collected all eight parts from the depths of my email archives and pieced it together, printed it out, and read it again. 
And hey, what do you know? It's not half bad! It's not even a third bad! It could use a little editing here and there, but it's pretty good. So, I'm being drawn into my old story, trying desperately to remember how I meant things to turn out. 
Anyway, you may be hearing a little more about it soon! I'm going to try to put up a section where we can sum up our different stories so that anyone starting to read them will have a bit of an idea of what's going on, so that's coming as well.
And while we're on the subject, what do y'all think of the redesign? A little more warm, a little more friendly, I think, but what's your opinion? Let me know in the comments!

Sé onr sverdar sitja hvass!
~ Trinity

Wednesday, December 5, 2012

Character Post - Deidre Traviat

Deidre Traviat ~ The Sorrowful Wanderer
(Dead-dray Trav-ee-ought)

She had dark hair that was lightly streaked with gray, which seemed out of place around her youthful face. Her clothing was rough and sturdy, but skillfully cut, and she handled her heavy staff with practiced ease.- Tribes of the Earth

Deidre is quite an interesting character to me. She is the first character that I created for TOTE, aside from the characters in the prologue, which I had a hard time abandoning. I have to consciously make sure that I don't just duplicate her from other characters that I've created, because there are similarities to Rienna (from Aouthentica). 

Deidre's a traveler. She doesn't stay in any one place for very long, and she lives in an age where travel is very dangerous. Not only have all the animals of the past century been turned loose and become wild and bloodthirsty, but the tribes are slow to trust strangers, and often the safest course of action is just to remove any possible threat, meaning that strangers are often killed on sight.

She travels the same route every year, or every season-cycle, depending on which tribe you're from. She goes from tribe to tribe, so she's safer than most travelers because the tribes know her. She keeps her past to herself, rarely gives out her name to anyone, so she's known merely as the Sorrowful Wanderer, which happens to be the literal meaning of her name (quelle coinky-dink, eh?).

She has dark hair with grey streaks, though it's because of genetics, not age. (Pay attention to that.) In her past life, she was fairly well off, as evidenced by her clothing, which is stylish and flattering but made of leather, wool, and other materials better suited for her rough lifestyle. On that note, she wears a cape and cowl, which I find a little difficult to describe. It looks like the picture above combined with ←this picture.

Pictures really are worth a thousand words, and because I had the freedom to create Deidre however I pleased and my brain didn't have any preconceived notions of what she should be like, I based her off a couple of different pictures. The two up there and this one → which I've posted before. 

Mostly the first and last one. Those are the ones I look at as I write (Scrivener!) for inspiration. 

Okay, now a little more about her personality. 
Deidre's ultimate goal is to have complete self-control. She doesn't want to let anyone know that they made her angry, or made her sad unless she wants them to know. She wants to be in control of herself. Not that she desires not to have emotions, but she wants to keep a tight leash on them instead of letting them flow. She wants to cry when it's appropriate to cry, laugh when it's appropriate to laugh, and be angry when it's appropriate to be angry.  
Which I think is something that I myself desire, especially being a teenage girl. Sometimes you get upset and when you think about it, you have no idea why.
She is a woman of many skills and when her control slips, she sometimes finding herself doing things she wouldn't have done had she thought it out rationally. And she prefers to be very rational and logical.
She has a great respect for the sanctity of life, both animal and human. However, if it's a choice between an animal's life and her own, she will always choose her own. If it's a choice between another human's life and her own, she will do her utmost to choose both.

As for why she's called the Sorrowful Wanderer (I keep writing "warrior" instead of "wanderer" for some unknown reason. Please ignore that mistake if you come across it.), she's seen a lot of terrible things in her relatively short time. At one point (that is yet to be posted) she tells someone that she comes from "a scattered tribe". She's seen many tribes rise, fall, and reform, usually violently. Sometimes, I imagine, she was even involved.

She has had to develop the skills to fend for and defend herself. Some she learned, and some she was taught. Her weapon of choice is her iron staff, which when manipulated correctly becomes more like a trident, only with the tines in a circle, like a claw, rather than lined up. If that makes sense.
For lack of a better explanation it looks like this, but on a staff. Then, when she's finished, or when she needs more of a javelin than a trident, she can slip the tines back in, close to the core, so it becomes a spear. It's very precious to her, as it was designed and crafted by someone she loved very much.



Deidre reached over and picked up her staff, holding it up for him to see. It was about an inch and a half wide on one end, narrowing to a point on the other. Near the sharp end, a wide leather band was wrapped around it. Deidre set it upright, wide end in the dirt and grasped around the leather band, pulling it downward in a quick motion. The top split apart into three razor sharp prongs.  
~Tribes Of The Earth

She also carries a long knife, which becomes very useful to her in the near future of the book. She also uses it for skinning, making tinder, and chopping small branches. Very useful. In a pinch, she won't hesitate to use it in self defense, though she prefers to use her staff.

Deidre's goal in her travels is basically justice. She intends to prevent what happened in her own tribe if at all possible.


And that's about it. I decided against putting any spoilers in this time, though I did hint vaguely at some things, which may not make sense until you've read the rest of what I've written. Besides, what's more fun than trying to figure out what's going to happen before it's happened when you actually had possible clues and hints to go on?

~ Trinity 

Sunday, December 2, 2012

Bob the Blog Post

It seems high time for a post of mine, which almost rhymes, but not quite. (I know, that last part just killed it, right?)

It's Hannah again.

NaNoWrimo was a no-go for me. I can't write that hard, that much, that long, so maybe next year. Besides,  I missed my other babies. You're only allowed to write something that doesn't have any pre-written materials, so all the books in my head wouldn't work because I write stuff all over the place.
So I'm writing on my normal story now! Well, actually, currently a prequel to my normal story that I haven't finished yet and should also be working on. So shame on me. I feel happy about writing again. I didn't like my NaNo book much at all.

"My babies" are elves. I love them. I'm working on a fantasy novel, about another dimension, with dragons and swords and battles and blood-thirsty 30-foot serpents and so on. That's where my babies come in.
Plus, these are proper elves. Tall, graceful, woodland types, not little Santa helpers or imp-like creatures that skip about in the woods. Those are elfs. Not elves. Big difference.

I'm not going to go into elegant detail like Trinity did, about how this book opened up like no other book I've ever done, since it was mostly an accident. And didn't start very well. But this is the one that's always in my head, all the time.
Sometimes something happens that surprises even me, and over the years it seems to have unfolded mostly on it's own. I know how some people say that; that their characters have minds of their own, and that the book is writing itself, but seriously, I don't think I'm quite good enough to have done all this stuff on purpose. A filler character from book one is the character that has the deepest history for me (he's my definite favorite). And someone that I didn't expect to be bad is bad, and someone that I meant to be friendly is a grump, and vice versa with another character. I have nooooo idea how some of these things happened. Also, being in a family with ten kids changes a few things. For example, I have a character named Dyani that my sister loves mindlessly and gets furious whenever I imply that I might kill her off. I'm still not sure about that one.

I will elaborate on this later, and for the meantime I have a lot of stuff to write, so venaxi (Elvish for "goodbye", according to my world).

Saturday, December 1, 2012

Tribes Of The Earth - Part One

Okay, first TOTE post! For those who may be new please check out the prologue at the tail end of this post. You really should read it before continuing on. Unless you've already read it, in which case, jump right in! 
Oh, one more thing. 
Feedback is not only appreciated, it's sought after. I wouldn't be posting if I didn't want feedback. I want the good and the bad. If something didn't make sense, or there was a confusing change in POV, please tell me. I can take it, I'm a big girl. All I ask is that you keep...
A: ...in mind I have not gone through to edit most of these sections yet.
and 
B: ...your comments clean, or I'll vaporize them with my dragon fire.



100 Years Later - 
“Argh!” Deidre snarled, clutching her upper arm. Blood poured from the wound.

Her attacker said something in a strange language, obviously taunting her.

Deidre grimaced and replied in kind, startling the man. She continued speaking, then darted forward in the middle of her sentence, iron staff whirling. The butt of the staff hit him soundly in the gut. He doubled over even as Deidre scolded him in his own language. He heard a dull whir, then crumpled to the ground.
Back in the land of the conscious, Deidre was examining the knife that had wounded her. It was dull where it wasn’t nicked and rusty where it wasn’t dull. She curled her lip in disgust and flung it as far away as she could, which was a good distance.
Keeping one hand pressed to her upper arm, she started going through the man’s duffel bag. She couldn’t help but smile as she as she unzipped it, once, twice, three times. She hadn’t seen a zipper in a long time. The fact that he carried such an antique meant that he was a desperate man. Most people these days carried leather bags with straps to hold them shut. To have an actual duffel bag would mean he had ventured into one of the Old Cities, a dangerous proposition.
She rummaged through the contents. There were several pretty baubles, a sharpening stone, three old books, as well as a collection of dirty garments, most of which had been wrapped around the baubles. She lifted one up to catch the fading sunlight. Though tarnished, the necklace sparkled with jewels of every shape and color.

“Worthless.” Deidre murmured regretfully. She liked jewels as much as any woman, but her lifestyle forced her to be practical. A necklace like that would make her a target. People would be too busy ogling it to notice her long knife or her heavy staff.
Blood dripped onto one of the books, reminding her of her current plight. She hurriedly pawed through the rest of the contents, but couldn’t find any medical supplies. With a sigh, she selected the cleanest shirt she could find and began tearing it into strips with one hand and her teeth. Before she began binding her arm, she took a close look at the cut and sighed again. She wished she could wash it out, but the only clean water she had was for drinking, and she couldn’t spare any for anything else.

It’s been well flushed by the blood, she assured herself. I’m fortunate it was a downward slash, and not sideways. I probably wouldn’t be able to move my arm otherwise.

After binding it up tightly, she pulled a length of rope out of her own pack, cut it into two shorter pieces and used it to tie up her attacker, hand and foot. She paused, then, with a smile, attached the ornate necklace around his neck. Finally, she slipped the sharpening stone into her pack and stood, holding her staff. It was completely dark now, and a full moon loomed huge in the sky. In the distance, a wolf howled. Much closer, another answered.
Deidre hesitated, glancing at her captive. She had fully intended to leave him to his own devices, but with the wolves out, he would almost certainly be seen as an easy meal. On the other hand, if she had only two days worth of water left and the nearest safe water source was exactly two days away. Any delay cold mean going without water, something she had had to do before, but was loathe to do again.
One of the wolves howled again, joined by several of it’s brethren.
Muttering at her conscience, she unslung her pack, retrieved her flint, and set about building a fire. Once she had a nice blaze built up, her captive finally began to stir.

“As ye heid feldin?” Deidre asked, asking him if his head still hurt.

“I feel like I’ve been stomped by a horse,” he growled in reply.

“You do speak a civilized tongue, then.” Deidre sat cross-legged on the opposite side of the fire.

He struggled to sit up, his movements awkward. “Is that what you call this tongue? Civilized?”

“Yes,” Deidre said calmly. “That’s what I call it.”

She drew her knife, laid it across her lap, and began to run the sharpening stone across it.

“That’s my stone, grisfath!” He cursed.

“Watch your mouth.” Deidre’s voice remained even, but her glare was dangerous. “It was your stone, and you’re lucky I didn’t just leave you here for the wolves.”

As if on cue, the wolf pack gave up it’s cry once more.

“What’s your name?” She asked, not looking up from her task.

“Gavin.” He answered, after a moment’s hesitation. “Aren’t we going to eat?”

“Even if I had food, what makes you think I’d give you any?” When he didn’t reply, she added, “I may go hunting later.”

“With what?” He snorted. “Your knife or your stick?”

Deidre reached over and picked up her staff, holding it up for him to see. It was about an inch and a half wide on one end, narrowing to a point on the other. Near the sharp end, a wide leather band was wrapped around it. Deidre set it upright, wide end in the dirt and grasped around the leather band, pulling it downward in a quick motion. The top split apart into three razor sharp prongs.

Gavin shifted uneasily. “You gonna throw it? A deer won’t stand still for you.”

“Why would I hunt a deer when there’s so many wolves about?” She asked quietly, reverting the staff to it’s original form. She sat back down and continued sharpening her knife. “You’re a strange man, Gavin. You expect to be served, yet you’ve been in one of the Old Cities, where only the desperate and insane go.”

She paused her work and looked at him. “You have been in one of the Old Cities?”

“I’ve been in many of them.” He said, sounding cautious. “How did you know?”

Deidre answered with another question, “Why did you attack me?”

“I thought you were someone else.” His reply was curt.

“Who?”

“None of your business, grisfath!” Gavin snapped.

Deidre didn’t say anything more. Despite her calm demeanor, though, she was furious. 
Not only had she kept him alive when it would’ve been more practical to kill him, she had delayed her journey to protect him. As if his apathy wasn’t enough, he continued to insult her.






After several more minutes of working silently, a thought came to her. It was so brilliant, she laughed aloud.

“What?” Gavin demanded.

Deidre put the stone back in her pack, sheathed her knife, and picked up her staff.

“Where are you going?”

Smiling, she winked at him and said, “Hunting. I’ll be back very soon.”

As she checked his bonds over again, he asked, “How long does it take you to track and kill a wolf?”

“I’ll be back very soon.” She repeated. “If I even have a suspicion that these ropes are looser when I get back, I will kill you.”

Gavin snarled, but didn’t doubt her.
True to her word, she was back very soon, with a rusty knife in one hand and a squirrel over her shoulder.

“That won’t feed us both.” He protested.

Deidre shot him a look of disgust. “I know that.”

She knelt behind him to check the ropes, and once satisfied, she moved to the fire, building it up twice as wide and three times as high. Gavin scooted away as the heat intensified.

“What are you doing now?”

Deidre picked up his rusty knife. “You posed quite the problem for me, Gavin. My conscience did not allow me to kill you for the sake of convenience. Nor did it allow me to leave you at the mercy of the wolves. So here is my solution. This fire will burn for several hours. Long enough to ward the wolves away until they’ve settled for the night.”

She tossed the knife into the center of the blaze, where it was quickly obscured by the flames. “At that point you can make a choice whether to use the remaining wood to stoke the fire back up or wait for it to cool enough to retrieve your knife and cut yourself loose.”

She slung her pack over she shoulder, her water skin across her chest, attached the squirrel to her belt by it’s tail, and picked up her staff. “Iysh hyoe pahth eigns gowe llwe thye.” I hope things go well with you.

He glared into the fire as she walked away, then said in a grudging tone, “Ansh llwe thye. Ye hawe lin gatatin.” And with you. You have my gratitude.

Deidre turned and nodded once. “I’d leave the squirrel with you, but it would only attract the wolves.”

“Just go!” He snarled, not looking the least bit grateful.

Deidre adjusted her grip on the staff and sprinted off into the woods, satisfied with the arrangements she had made. 






So don't. 
Because these works are my babies.
And if my babies get stolen...
I become a territorial, fire-breathing, revenge-driven dragon, that in my rage and grief I will tear off the roof of your most sacred dwelling and turn your electronic devices into a mass of molten metal and plastic.
And you don't want that.
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